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Final Cut: a Short Story 
by Zack Roddy, Editor-in-chief

     The front door slammed open, and Rachel ran as fast as her legs could take her. Heavy male footsteps landed in step behind her, and all she could think about was survival.
     Her mind was in tatters- she was the only one left alive out of her friends, and that was not going to last for much longer. When she had first laid eyes on the psycho freak, she believed she had stumbled into one of her own nightmares. With yellowish skin, cracked teeth, and gnarled pick axe, Jedidiah Worley was the scariest man she had ever seen in her seventeen years on this earth. And now she was trapped in his secluded Georgia farmhouse in the middle of nowhere.
     Rachel ran up the rickety staircase in the foyer, tears streaming down her face, and heard him giggle obscenely at the bottom. And in a terrible moment of horror, she understood why.
     I’m a sitting duck upstairs. There is nowhere for me to go.
    
“Oh…oh God. Please don’t kill me.”, she pleaded with him. “Please.”
     “Oh, I’m not just gonna kill ya”, he replied in nasty whisper, slowly advancing up the staircase, “I’m gonna make you beg first. You’ll BEG ME!” The axe blade whistled as he swung into the banister, taking a chunk of wood right out of it. Rachel screamed and ran down the upstairs hallway. She picked the first door she saw, practically diving through it, and turned around to see him running down the hall, straight towards her.
     “Don’t you close that door!” he screamed, “Don’t you dare close that door girly!”
     She slammed the door right in his face. It immediately opened again, and for a split second, she saw her death in his eyes. But survival overcame fear, and she slammed the door again, jamming a chair underneath the knob. The knob twisted several times, but did not budge, and she could hear his screams of hatred and frustration from behind the three inches of wood. She whooped in happiness, she had bought herself another few moments of…
      THE AXE BLADE BROKE THROUGH THE CENTER OF THE DOOR!
     Wood chips sprayed her face, and she emptied her lungs as she screamed. Jedidiah’s hand slid through the hole in the door and threw the chair out of the way. Rachel scrambled to her feet and stood rigid in horror as the door opened. Glancing around the room, Rachel realized in terror that there was no way out. There was just a bed, a closet, a window…
     The window!
    
Without thinking or considering the risk, Rachel jumped straight through the glass and fell twenty feet into the yard below, landing hard on her feet and palms. Jolts of pain shot up her legs, and Rachel screamed in agony. Something was broken or sprained; she could feel it in her right leg. She got up on her left leg, and limped as fast as she could away from the house. But as fast as she could was not very fast at all, and she could hear the front door slam open from behind her.  He was chasing her.
     “God-Oh-God-Oh-God.”, she whispered to herself, and limped feebly into the woods ahead of her. She could hear his heavy footsteps behind her, and tears poured down her face. She limped up behind a tree, and held her breath. She couldn’t hear anything. And then he jumped right in front of her! Rachel screamed but her scream was cut short as he buried the axe in her stomach. Rachel laid on the ground, in a feeble heap, and died.
     “CUT! THAT’S A WRAP EVERYONE! FINAL CUT!”
     Rachel suddenly stepped up from the ground.
     “Great job, Penny”, the director said to her.
     Penny smiled. “Thanks.”
     Jedidiah walked up to Penny and put his arm around her. “Did I jab you with the rubber axe to hard?” he asked her.
     “Nah, it only hurt a second Gary.”
     “Okay, good. Let’s go get ready for the next scene.”
     And side by side, they walked to the make-up trailer.
 

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